Hmmm...not the best thing ever, but it's okayish. Originally it was in colour (I painted it with watercolours...I'm not great with them,as you can see, but they're fun to use), but I scanned it in greyscale instead because it just looked better that way. I didn't plan to have a poem there...but it just sort of came into my head and begged to be put on...well, I can't say paper...screen? Hnn. Whatever.
now im not going to lie... im in a state of dis-repair and self destruction. but here is my honest opinion of this peice.
It is very well written and holds its point to the end. i like it becuase i think the same way,
"i think you lost your mind"
"i think my mind works better via remote"
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I have lived a life of two, Seen a dream broken Crossed a stream unwettened And watched as the sky Turned amber and blue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thank you so much for commenting ^^ I'm glad you like it
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It is very well written and holds its point to the end. i like it becuase i think the same way,
"i think you lost your mind"
"i think my mind works better via remote"
--
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I have lived a life of two,
Seen a dream broken
Crossed a stream unwettened
And watched as the sky
Turned amber and blue.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
--
What's with you? Do I have to be ill? Have a disease, a fatal disease? Would you cry and say you love me then? Or do I have to die? Will I lie cold, in the ground, before you weep for me?...Okay then. Okay.
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